Now I’m as much a fan of minimalist erotica as the next guy, but I think this message takes things a bit too far. Placing the whole story, while a good one, in the subject line really ruins the suspense. On the other hand, the lack of response to the expressed moan could be taken as a commentary on the finite nature of the sexual experience. I.E. there is nothing more anticlimatic than a climax.
Lord Malinov, Erotic Romances